From fanfic-request@fanfic.com Fri Oct 17 00:49:04 1997 Received: from tendo-dojo.ranma.net by dragon.emich.edu (5.65v4.0/1.1.8.2/06Dec96-1157AM) id AA10190; Fri, 17 Oct 1997 00:49:01 -0400 Received: (from list@localhost) by tendo-dojo.ranma.net (8.6.11/0.0.0) id WAA20234; Thu, 16 Oct 1997 22:51:50 -0400 Resent-Date: Thu, 16 Oct 1997 22:49:26 -0400 Date: Thu, 16 Oct 1997 21:48:14 -0500 (CDT) From: RPM - acct 3/5 Reply-To: RPM - acct 3/5 To: Lara Bartram , Mike Loader , fanfic list In-Reply-To: <9710170133.AA23336@emunix.emich.edu> Message-Id: Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII Resent-Message-Id: <"lmgLPB.A.u4E.tItR0"@tendo-dojo> Resent-From: fanfic@fanfic.com X-Mailing-List: archive/latest/45881 X-Loop: fanfic@fanfic.com Precedence: list Resent-Sender: fanfic-request@fanfic.com Subject: [FFML] The More Things Read on "Black and Blue" (LEMON) Status: RO REVIEWER'S NOTE: The More Things Read features the newcomers from the fanfic series 'The More Things Change'(available at http://www.uh.edu/~rpm/fanfic.htm) and past reviews are archived at Travis Butler's site, http://www.tfs.net/~tbutler/FFC/Muho.html ---------------------------------------------------------------------- WARNING: REVIEWING A **LEMON** FIC ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Once upon a time there were these four siblings, who happened to be martial artists, who also happened to be movie buffs... One was a rather skinny fellow, looking a lot like Hikaru Gosunkugi, the other a short-haired girl with a fair tan, the next a sloppily dressed lad with long hair and eyeglasses, and finally, a rather cute 12 year old with a hyperactivity problem.... ROLL CALL! Ryo Muhoshin, snide yet debonaire Ryoko Muhoshin, a teen girl with flare Megs Muhoshin, a pervert beyond compare Kyoko Muhoshin, tiny tot without a care Ryoko: So, what's up for tonight? > Black and Blue > by Lara Bartram Ryo: Say... isn't Miss Bartram the one that wrote that.. um.. the piece with Kasumi being... well... Megs: Kasumi as a sex-kitten? Ayep, and this is a side-story to her series 'Wolf in Samurai's Clothing.' Ryo: 'Wolf in...' doesn't this have a lemon rating? Megs: (Grinning madly) It suuuuuuuuuure does. Ryoko: Oh my. Ryo: Oh dear. Megs: OH YES! Kyoko: Huh? Ryoko: Well... the last part we watched wasn't so bad... maybe this won't be either. Megs: (scowling) It'd better NOT be that mild. Ryo: I've got the earmuffs. You got the blindfold? Ryoko: Ayep. Kyoko: HEY! NOT AGAIN! > Kodachi opened her eyes feeling weak and disoriented. She had > been having the strangest dream, though she couldn't remember any of > it now. She struggled to sit up, realizing she was in her bed, > wearing a nightgown. She tried to call out for someone, but her > voice only squeaked. Kyoko: M-I-C... K-E-Y... M-O-U-*mff* Megs: (covering Kyoko's mouth) Please, you're ruining the mood. > And then the door to her room opened and her father poked his > head in. "My little wahine!" he said, charging into the room and > embracing her tightly, tears trickling down his face. Ryoko: Eh? Wahine? Ryo: Hawaiian term. Means 'daughter' or something. Kyoko: Wai! HaWAIian! Ryo: Kyoko... that was bad. Very bad. > Unused to the attention from her father, and the fact that his > hold was rather tight, Kodachi struggled against him and tried to > speak. Still no sound coming from her mouth, Kodachi pushed against > his shoulders with her hands, but her arms felt like two sponges, > completely without strength. Megs: If anything would feel like two sponges I would think it'd be her t- Ryoko: ENOUGH! Ryo: Oh please, she's much more firm than a sponge. Megs: And how would YOU know? Ryo: Ah.... I heard a rumor. Megs: Riiiiiiiiight. > Kodachi shuddered when her father kissed her on the cheek, > still babbling about his 'little wahine'. She only wanted him to let > her go and get out of her room. A disgusting thought occurred to her > then; what if he had been the one taking care of her? She shuddered > again at the thought. > It would have been so nice if Ranma had actually cared enough > to take care of her. Kodachi felt warm inside at the thought of the > tenderness he would have shown her. Yet, she knew he wouldn't do such > a thing. And even if he had wanted to, her brother would not have > allowed him to do so. So maybe it was Tatewaki that cared for her. > That thought, as simple as it may have seemed, sent shivers up > her spine. Shivers of anticipation. She still wasn't able to take > care of herself, she would still need help. Maybe he would help her > in the bath... Hold it, put the brakes on! Just what was she > thinking? Ryo: ... Ryoko: ... Megs: Er... okay, this ain't goin'in the direction I was hoping. Ryoko: And what direction were you hoping for? Megs: Well, there were these damn hot scenes with Nabiki in'em where she was- Ryoko: I get the idea. Megs: And then there was Kasumi and- Ryo: Enough! > Sure he wasn't that bright, but he wasn't bad looking. And he > seemed to care about her now. Though, first order of business was to > get her father off her. It was entirely inappropriate. Finally, with > one giant push, she managed to get him away from her. > He looked at her a little stunned, before speaking. "Wahine, > are you OK?" > Kodachi nodded, her voice still on hiatus. Ryo: Contract negociations underway Megs: A mid-season replacement is scheduled Both: WAHAHAHAAH! Ryoko: Morons. > "Good, 'cause I been so worried about you." > This was entirely too strange. He had never been worried > about her or Tatewaki for as long as she could remember. Instead of > worrying about it, Kodachi pointed at the door. She just hoped he'd > get the point. > "But I can't leave my little wahine here all by herself," he > declared, not moving from where he was sitting. > Kodachi stared at him hard, but she could only see her > reflection in his sunglasses. That stupid little palm tree seemed to > be mocking her. She pointed again at the door. Megs: Oh look, it's Mr. Tree. Say hi to everyone, Mr. Tree. Mr. Tree: Hi there! Ryo: ... Ryoko: ... Kyoko: ... > "No. I'm not leaving you alone again, wahine. Who knows what > bad things what might happen?" > 'Bad things are already happening,' Kodachi thought. If only > Tatewaki would show up and provide a distraction. > "No, Kotchi. I ain't ever leaving you again." The tone his > voice had suddenly taken scared Kodachi. > She shook her head, pointing at the door. > "But you're such a pretty flower, Kotchi. If I don't protect > you, who knows what could happen to you." > Kodachi was beginning to feel ill. Obviously her father was a > lot sicker than anyone had ever given him credit for. She tried to > push him away again, but he grabbed her wrists and forced her hands > back. Ryo: Oh my. Ryoko: Ew sick! Megs: Shame on you for giving him naughty ideas, Mr. Tree. Ryo: PUT THAT PUPPET AWAY! > Kodachi's mind seemed to blank at the prospect of what was > about to happen. Wasn't once enough? Why did it have to happen > again? And here she couldn't even find the strength to fight back. > She wanted to scream, but all she could manage was a pained squeak. > "Don't worry wahine, I'll make everything better." > There was something about seeing her face reflected in his > sunglasses that finally unlocked her voice. Kodachi screamed loud and > long. Megs: EEEEEEEEEEEEEW! Ryoko: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEW! Ryo: Ugh. Kyoko: Why's Kodachi's daddy holdin'her like that? Ryo: ah... er... BLINDFOLD! Ryoko: Got it! Kyoko: HEY! Ryoko: Earmuffs! Ryo: Got it! Kyoko: HEY! CAN'T SEE! > Tatewaki was drowsing in the basement. Ever since his father > had returned, it had been impossible to get any sort of peace and > quiet in any room in the house except the basement. > He was stretched out in front of a small fireplace, the flames > burning low as they warmed his side and stomach. It had gotten to the > point that he just didn't care any longer what form he was in. Though > he had to admit he felt more uninhibited when he was a wolf. > And it was so nice to feel like he was in a cozy little oven > the way his fur got real warm. Tatewaki rolled to his side, his back > to the fire. His tail twitched unconsciously as he began to slip into > deep sleep. It was the scream that woke him up. Ryoko: tail? Megs: This is that werewolf fic, remember? Ryoko: oh yeah. > The door burst open, startling Kodachi and her father. Both > of them directed their attention at the figure in the doorway. > Tatewaki growled at the scene before him. Whatever was going > on, he didn't like. His father was... compromising his sister. That > wasn't good. He stalked up to the bed and yanked his father away. Megs: Okay, this daddy-little girl bit really ain't my thing Ryo: Ew. Ryoko: ew ew ew. Kyoko: Can't see! Can't see! > Kodachi watched fearfully, thinking, hoping she was still in a > dream, watching the whole frightening scene unfold in front of her. > It began with her brother, looking angrier than any time she had seen > him before, casually picking up their father and tossing him across > the room. Then her brother walked over and calmly beat the snot out > of her father. Ryo: Serves'em right. Ryoko: Damn straight. Megs: *whew* Okay, good going, Blue Blunder, now dump Kodachi somewhere and go hump Nabiki. *WHAP* Megs: OOOW! What'd I say?! > It looked like something fairly easy and straightforward. > To Tatewaki, it was an agonizing decision, working against all his > instincts. Or more precisely, pitting his instincts against each > other. > There was the thing that said to defend his family. But it > didn't say what to do if his family was fighting each other. And then > there was the more primal instinct that said there was a competing > male attacking one of his females. The female/more liked family > member argument won out, and he had turned against his father. > Once he was pummeled into submission, Tatewaki went back to > the bed and gathered Kodachi, unresisting, into his arms. Giving one > last evil glare at his father, the two left the bedroom. Megs: Good. Outta the bedroom. > Kodachi held on to her brother tightly, still disoriented and > upset. She leaned her head against his chest, still hoping it was > only a dream, but not minding if it continued for a little bit. > She watched the walls move past, sighing to herself. Kodachi > felt like she was seven years old again. That was all she wanted; > someone that would take care of her, but no one ever wanted to. They > were all afraid of her, or mad at her, but not her brother. Nothing > she did ever seemed to bother him, which she was secretly glad of. > She had no worries about him carrying her to the basement. > Kodachi knew that their father probably wouldn't be able to find them > in the maze-like sublevel, and even if he did, Tatewaki would take > care of him. Ryoko: Nice to see a story where there's strong sibling ties. Megs: Basement... er... Ryoko: Something wrong? Megs: Eh... nothin, I guess I'm worrying about nothing. > Tatewaki carried his sister back to the room he had been > resting in. There wasn't anything special about it, except he had > made it his own private space, a place where no one would disturb him. > Actually, he would just stay in it to sleep in front of a warm fire. > But with Kodachi with him... Things were different, she was > different. > He sat on the floor, still holding Kodachi, cradling her in > his lap. After what had happened upstairs, he couldn't let her go > just yet, not until he was sure she was safe. He was very glad it was > Saturday and the nurse who took care of Kodachi during the week hadn't > been there. That just would have been far too difficult to explain. > With Kodachi in his arms, clinging to him, he looked down at > her, wanting to ease her fright. Except, when he looked at her, he > saw the nightgown, that he had put on her, the way the dim firelight > highlighted the gauzy material. By no means was his sister a > mannequin any longer. She was very much alive, very warm, very soft > in his arms. Tatewaki closed his eyes and tried to drive away the > thoughts that were plaguing him. Ryo: Ah... is this... Megs: This ain't going where I think it's going... I hope... Ryoko: Eh? What're you guys talking about? > Kodachi felt her brother's hands tighten their hold for a > moment, then relax. She looked up at him and saw that his eyes were > closed. Admiring the way the light played across the fur on his face, > Kodachi smiled. It felt a little scary, the way she felt about him > because she had never felt the same way about anyone else. Ryo: ... Megs: ... Ryoko: ... Kyoko: I CAN'T SEE! I CAN'T HEAR! WAH! > It wasn't the same thing she felt for Ranma, it wasn't the > same thing she felt for... Well, Ranma was the only person she loved. > Besides her brother, but it wasn't the same. And her brother had done > the same thing for her that Ranma had done. He had saved her, rescued > her. A strange impulse overtook Kodachi and she hugged her brother, > burying her face into his chest. > Tatewaki leaned his head down over her, pleased to know she > was grateful for what he had done. He really only wanted what was > best for her, after all. Except... Megs: Except? Except what? Baaaaad feeling about this. Badbadbad. > Kodachi began to stroke her brother's back, leaving her face > against his chest. She could hear and feel his heart beating, picking > up its pace as she held him. His hands shifted, she supposed he was > trying to be subtle about it, to hold her a bit more... intimately. > Kodachi found that she didn't mind all that much. Ryo: erah... ar... er... I have no idea what to say. > Adjusting both their positions, Tatewaki gently placed Kodachi > on the floor while she was holding on to him. He shifted a little so > he could lay on top of her if he wanted, but for the moment, he was > content to kneel over her, wrapping his arms around her body. > Kodachi was engulfed by a pair of long, furry arms, and > immediately she felt safe. For a few moments, peace reigned as the > two hugged each other. Yet, this was nothing like the nights they sat > outside and watched the sky. This was something... different. > Kodachi could feel it. > Reluctantly releasing her hold, Kodachi looked up at her > brother. Tatewaki unwrapped his arms and Kodachi quickly took his > hands in her own. She squeezed them lightly, enjoying the way his > skin felt against her own. His fur was very nice, but his skin was so > much more... real. Ryoko: Fur? Skin? What the hell is this?! Megs: Ooooohboy. Ryo: Gah. > Kodachi dropped one of his hands and reached up to touch his > face. She traced the sharp edge of one cheekbone and stroked the fur > down her brother's neck. Smiling gently, her emotions going through a > complete upheaval, Kodachi traced the collar bone, then moved her > finger down the sternum until she could feel the abdominal muscles. > She could also feel her brother's entire body quivering. > Anticipation? Did it match her own? Her own anticipation for what? > What was she expecting to happen? Ryoko: What the hell is happening?! > She laid back on the floor, still holding Tatewaki's hand. > Whatever happened, happened. Kodachi would allow things to develop > and go as far as they could. She had really stopped caring about such > boundaries a while ago because love had seemed like such an impossible > goal for her. What difference did it make what society found > distasteful when she didn't ever think she'd find someone that would > really love her? Ryoko: Waita- They're not- Megs: It... ah... looks that way, don't it? Ryo: Um... I am... inclined to agree. Ryoko: EEEEEEEEW! > Just once, just for a little bit, Kodachi wanted to feel what > it felt like to be wanted. She wanted to know what it felt like to be > loved, not as a sister, but as a woman. She wanted to know what real > physical affection felt like, to prove that it wasn't all a lie. Ryoko: Kodachi you pervert! Megs: Y'know, this is kinda like watching a car wreck? Ryo: Oh? How so? Megs: It's disgusting, yet we can't help but look. Ryo: Scary but true. > With only her eyes, she begged for the physical attention. > Looking deep into Tatewaki's eyes, she could see the same desires > restrained. Just like him, but if the feeling was mutual... > Kodachi sat up a little, her hair flowing freely behind her, > took hold of both of Tatewaki's forearms, then laid back again, > pulling him on top of her. She laughed quietly when she saw the > surprised look on his face. Ryoko: Surprised look on HIS face? I'm damn shocked! Megs: You are not the only one. Ryo: Gah. > It was funny that he was just so... > honorable and naive about everything. He had been having sex with > Nabiki nearly every day for... at least two months and he acted like a > blushing virgin. > Kodachi ran her hands across her brother's chest, her eyes > never leaving his. "You... you love me, right?" > Tatewaki nodded emphatically. Of course he loved her. She > was his sister; it was impossible for him to feel any other way about > her. > "And I... I... I love you." Saying that had never been more > difficult in her life. "Please," she said quietly. Ryo: (stares at screen, suddenly crushes the soda in his hand) Megs: (stares at screen, suddenly crumples the bag of popcorn in his hand) Ryoko: (stares at screen, bites down on the straw from her soda) > That seemed to break the restraint Tatewaki had on his > feelings. He gave one small nod then leaned down and held Kodachi > against him, trying to make sense of what was going on. > Kodachi whispered in his ear, "I want to see your face. I > want to know it's you." > Tatewaki could almost feel his brain smoke at that request, > but it was impossible to refuse her. Whatever strange influence he > had had over women, it was nothing compared to the power they held > over him. Ending the embrace, he stood up and watched Kodachi settle > herself on the floor, on his rug. She was on his rug, which meant > that she was his as well. Sometimes his mind seemed to work in the > strangest ways... > Changing back to human, he saw Kodachi smile at him and > couldn't help himself any longer. He got down with one knee on either > side of Kodachi's body, then put one hand on either side of her head. > Tatewaki moved his head down until his face was no more than two > inches from Kodachi's. At that point, he was lost. How was he > supposed to initiate this sort of contact with his sister? Ryoko: You're... um.... you're not... no... definitely not... Ryo: Absolutely.... er... not. Megs: Er, yeah... not... not... not. Kyoko: CAN'T SEE! > Kodachi could see the confusion on her brother's face. It was > a look she saw a lot and knew it quite well. Unlike most times, she > was just as hesitant, just as unsure as he was. She wanted to know, > she wanted to experience it all, but the situation was so strange. > Maybe it wasn't the right thing to do after all. > Tatewaki licked his lips nervously and lowered his head the > rest of the way, making soft contact with Kodachi's mouth. He could > tell that Kodachi was surprised by the way she seemed to freeze up. > Ending the contact quickly, Tatewaki thought he had done something > wrong. Maybe he had misinterpreted Kodachi's meaning, and maybe he > had just made the biggest mistake of his life. > Kodachi looked at her brother, not quite able to comprehend > what had just happened or the feelings racing through her. She > swallowed and wetted her lips. It had been short, but sweet, and she > wanted more. Kodachi lifted her head and kissed her brother, closing > her eyes to concentrate fully on the pleasant sensations she was > feeling. Ryoko: aeee...ur... Ryo: ava... aa....era... Megs: woooah.... > She was getting warm all over, and it wasn't because of the > fire. It was getting to be that the nightgown was far too heavy and > she wanted to shed it. Keeping her mouth engaged, Kodachi grabbed > Tatewaki's hand and guided it to her hip. Tatewaki simply shifted his > weight to balance on one hand while his other pushed Kodachi's > nightgown up. Ryo: (pulls out a fan and starts fanning himself. Loosens his tie.) Ryoko: (pulls out a fan and starts fanning herself. Undoes top button of shirt.) Megs: (wipes fog from eyeglasses) > Kodachi hadn't given it much thought before, but her brother > had good taste in women's clothing and fashion. That thought went > right out the window when a large, soft hand began to gently fondle > her breast. It wasn't too rough and seemed to know what exactly to do > to make her feel the heights of pleasure. > Tatewaki stopped his ministrations and lifted Kodachi's hand, > placing it on her breast, then put his own hand over hers. He applied > gentle pressure and squeezed as if it was his hand on her breast > instead of her own. Megs: MMmm.... firm breast... Ryo: (stifles nosebleed with hankercheif) > Kodachi was definitely getting warmer, hot even. And then, > when she ran her free hand down his back, fingering the waistband of > his pants, he slowly lowered his body so he was laying on top of her. > Kodachi could feel her brother's excitement pressing into her stomach, > and wasn't so sure she'd mind feeling it in her hands, in her body. > She wasn't so sure she'd mind doing anything he asked of her. > With that, Tatewaki began slowly grinding his hips against > Kodachi, testing her willingness with his tongue. And she was willing > enough, battling back with her tongue and teeth. He ran his hand > lightly up and down her leg, each time coming close to the elastic of > the panties he had dressed her in earlier. > The next time his hand came close to the the white satin, > Kodachi made a muffled sound of affirmation. She felt Tatewaki's hand > slide up farther, his fingertips catching the edge of the elastic and > pulling up the band a little before moving up to the waist. As his > fingers slipped into her panties, a sudden hesitation overtook > Kodachi. Ryo: (nosebleed goes full blast, passes out) Megs: (glasses in full fog effect) Ryoko: (blushing an incredibly severe shade of red) > The two of them shouldn't really be doing this. Ryoko: That's... er.. right... they.... shouldn't Megs: Eee... eyah... shouldn't. Kyoko: CAN'T SEE! WAH! > But it felt > so good, and Tatewaki knew exactly what to do. He knew what to do > even when she didn't. Tatewaki shifted his body a bit so he could get > his hand down all the way into her panties. Ryoko: Megs, yer droolin on Ryo. Megs: awahaaava... > Kodachi broke their mutual kissing and gasped. Tatewaki moved > down, leaning on his one arm, and began kissing Kodachi's neck. > Kodachi was beginning to breathe heavily, making little noises of > surprise and pleasure. The hand that had been resting idly on her > chest grasped her brother's shoulder and squeezed tight. The other > had a hold of his pants and were keeping a constant pull on them. > Kodachi didn't know if he had been born with the knowledge or > if it was from lots of practice with Nabiki, but it felt like her > brain was about to explode from feelings assaulting her. She wanted > to tell him to take it one step farther, but again, her voice was not > under her command. It felt like there was a fuse slowly burning down, > whatever would detonate sitting at the point her brother's hand and > fingers were working on. > Tatewaki had gotten so carried away, he had almost missed his > chance at really showing his sister what it meant to be the alpha > male. He removed his hand from Kodachi's honeypot and pushed her > panties down the rest of the way. He pulled them off her legs and > tossed them aside. Megs: (in a faint, awe-struck voice) oh... my. > Kodachi's hands worked feverishly at the button of Tatewaki's > pants before the two flaps finally came apart and the zipper was > yanked down. Kodachi's hands immediately went down her brother's > pants and began removing them from the inside. He wriggled a bit, > helping her until he could manage to kick them off. Ryoko: (turns a deeper shade of red) Mmm... look at the size of his- Megs: HEY! > Kodachi put her hands around her brother's shaft, only to have > have him yank her hands away. Tatewaki re-situated himself on top of > her and resumed their kissing, both of them beyond control. The light > from the flickering flames shined on their sweat covered skin as they > moved against each other. Slowly but surely, Tatewaki was working > himself into position, preparing to slip into his sister's warm > wetness. > Bracing himself on his knees, Tatewaki reached down and > grabbed Kodachi's rear, lifting her pelvis off the rug, getting her in > just the right position. It was the moment of truth, even though the > truth had been discovered a while back. Tatewaki moved his head down > and grasped the thin nightgown in his teeth. He pulled the nightgown > up toward Kodachi's neck, then moved back down and rubbed his cheek > against Kodachi's exposed breasts. Megs: (nosebleed starts, he struggles to control it while wiping the fog from his glasses) Ryoko: (fans herself furiously while taking occasional pulls on her drink via straw. Tugs her shirt a bit) Ryo: (regains consciousness, looks at the screen, passes out again.) > Tatewaki shuddered then used his tongue to tease the sensitive > areola, and opened his mouth. As he gently bit down on Kodachi's > nipple, he thrust himself into her, the combined sensations sending > her completely over the edge. Ryoko: (squirms uncomfortably in her seat) Megs: (squirms uncomfortably in his seat) Ryo: (nosebleed continues to stain the seat) > As her brother began to move, keeping his gentle hold on her > breast, Kodachi found herself nothing but a mass of pleasure. Every > touch, every movement, every thought was pleasure, was about pleasure. > She nearly screamed as Tatewaki lifted her legs, hooking them around > him just below his armpits. And then he really started thrusting, > pounding into Kodachi, dragging his tongue all over her chest. Ryoko: (visibly sweating and very red in blush) Megs: (visibly sweating and very red in blush) Kyoko (blindfolded, earmuffed, and pouting.) Ryo: (regains consciousness, sprouts another nosebleed, and struggles to stay conscious.) > But Tatewaki wasn't satisfied. He lifted Kodachi up with her > still impaled on him, and braced her against one wall. Kodachi > stretched out her arms and held them flat, clutching at the wall, > feeling her back rake on the stone as her brother began ramming > himself into her again. > Tatewaki had one arm under Kodachi's body, supporting her, > while the other was back on her breast, squeezing and pinching, his > mouth attacking her neck. This was far better than any dream because > it was really happening, and there was almost no hesitation, no guilt > involved. It just felt like the right thing to do. And it felt > really, REALLY good. Ryoko: (faintly) I bet. Ryo: (faintly) hm? Ryoko: (faintly) nothin'. > Kodachi was beginning to reach a point where she just couldn't > help herself. She was losing control of her body, where it just > seemed to do things on its own. She figured it had something to do > with the mass amounts of pleasure she was feeling, combined with hard > stone at her, making a truly intense sexual experience. > As she slowly worked her way to her peak, she knew this was > what happened when she watched her brother with Nabiki. This was what > Nabiki always made so much noise about, and this was what she was > about to experience. > Tired of simply pinning his sister to the wall, Tatewaki > removed his mouth from her breasts and pulled back a little. He gave > himself just enough room to get his hand between their bodies, where > worked his finger down to tease Kodachi's clitoris. > Nabiki had complained that it was too distracting because the > feeling was so intense, so Tatewaki, as best he could in the tight > space, worked his finger around it, touching it gently every so often. > He knew Kodachi was almost ready, so he wanted to wait until the final > moment to surprise her. Megs: . o O (Must remember technique... must remember position...) Ryoko: . o O (Must remember technique... must remember position...) Ryo: . o O (Oh my!) Kyoko: . o O (CAN'T SEE!) > Kodachi couldn't believe the animal-like noises she was > making. Grunts and moans, sometimes punctuated by a 'don't stop' and > her heavy breathing... It was like she was a wholly different person. > This time she had nothing to grab onto as all the muscles in her body > began to clench, and all she could do was arch her back, thrusting her > pelvis out while squeezing hard with her legs locked around her > brother. > That signaled it. The clenching muscles meant it was only a > matter of seconds. Getting in two more forceful thrusts, Tatewaki > pinched Kodachi's clitoris and slammed into her, holding his position. > All it took was for her to be near an orgasm for him to go, and that > he did. > Kodachi's entire body shook with the force of her feelings, > her entire body seemingly trying to clamp down on her brother. Her > arms flailed against the wall as she continued to move on his shaft > even though he had stopped. This time, the feel of her insides being > bathed in that hot liquid didn't bring a feel of disgust, only > ecstasy. It wasn't an invasion this time, but a welcomed presence. > After a few moments, in which Kodachi gritted her teeth and > squeezed her eyes shut extremely tightly, her muscles relaxed, and she > slowly came down from the orgasmic high she had just experienced. > Kodachi slumped against the wall a little, feeling utterly exhausted. > When her brother removed himself and held her gently, she put her arms > around him and laid her head on his shoulder. (The siblings, except Kyoko, all look terribly uncomfortable and sport fairly strong blushes) Ryoko: er... ah... that was... Megs: um... yeah... very.. um... Ryo: oh my oh my oh my... Kyoko: TAKE OFF THE BLINDFOLD!!! > Tatewaki carried his sister back to the rug and laid her down > gently. He then retrieved a thin blanket and covered her body. She > was almost asleep already, which brought a gentle smile to his > features. His sister had finally escaped trap she had fallen into > when she had been raped. Hopefully she could see what possibilities > were ahead with the real love, reciprocated love, of a man. Not the > one-sided obsessiveness or brutal display of power she had > experienced before. > Fetching his pants, he put them on with his back to his > sister. He didn't see her eyes open and watch him as he finished > dressing, then close again as he turned around. Kneeling next to her, > Tatewaki kissed her forehead. "Good night, Kotchi." Then he got up > and left the room. > "Good night, Tatchi," Kodachi said as she pulled up the > blanket and drifted off to sleep. Ryoko: (stands up quickly) um... gotta use the ladies room, back inna bit. (rushes off QUICKLY) Megs: I... cannot... stand. Ryo: Why not? Megs: (glares at Ryo) THINK about it. Ryo: Oh. You know... neither can I. Megs: Damn, I need a cigarette. Ryo: (blinks, looks at his drink, frowns.) Damn, soda. Hey, you got water in your glass? Megs: Yeah, just water an'ice. Ryo: Gimmie. (Grabs drink and splashes himself with it) Megs: Damn. I needed that. Kyoko: TAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE OOOOOOOOOOOOOOFF THE BLINDFOOOOOOOOOLD!!!! -the end?- Ryoko: (returns) Hey... why're you two looking at me like that, ya perverts!!!!! Megs: I ain't looking at nothing! Ryo: Please, as if I would! Kyoko: Um... why's Ryo-niichan an'Megs-niichan blushing. Ryo & Megs: WE ARE NOT! -the end- (we hope)